week11

1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

I think i deserve 2 points.

 

2) What did you do well?

I have appropriate and logical supportings. I have many examples through experiences.

3) What could you have done better?
I think I do not check grammar errors even though I have lots of errors. I used some Korean words because there were some name of films and bands. I will try to translate them.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?
CONFIRMATION. I tried hard to strenngthen my arguments.

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better?
I will check and correct my grammar or spelling errors. Also, I will change Korean words used in my essay into English. I will find more reasearch to persuade audience.